Edited paragraph
Finance teams spend hours every close fixing duplicate rows, inconsistent date formats, and broken formulas. [Product name] cleans those errors automatically, so your team can start analysis with data it can trust. [NEED: one proof point, e.g. "Teams cut cleanup time from X hours to Y"]
Upload a spreadsheet and see it cleaned in [NEED: time]. [NEED: trial or offer, e.g. "Free for 14 days, no card required"]
Main changes
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Opened with the reader's problem. The original opened with "innovative, cutting-edge platform." The edit opens with what finance teams deal with at close. This follows the "lead with the reader's problem" fix for weak openings.
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Replaced vague words with the facts they stood for. "Innovative," "cutting-edge," "best-in-class AI," "seamlessly streamline," and "unlock the power of your data" don't say what the product does. The edit says it cleans spreadsheets and names the errors it fixes. The skill treats "streamline" and "seamless" as placeholders, and the original had both in one sentence.
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Removed the contrast reveal. "It is not just a tool, it is a game-changer" is a stock "not X, it's Y" pattern. The edit states the benefit directly: your team starts analysis with data it can trust.
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Cut stock phrases. "Whether you are a startup or an enterprise, we have got you covered" is filler, and it also contradicts the finance-team focus. The edit speaks to one audience.
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Made the CTA concrete. "Get started today!" became a specific first step ("Upload a spreadsheet") with a place for a time-to-result and a risk reducer such as a trial or no-card line.
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Added proof slots instead of inventing numbers. The original made big claims with no evidence. I marked
[NEED: ...]where a stat, customer result, or offer belongs, since I don't have those facts.
Please check
- The error examples (duplicates, date formats, broken formulas) are my assumptions about what a finance spreadsheet cleaner fixes. Swap in what your tool actually handles.
- Send me the product name, a real result, and the trial terms, and I'll finalize the copy.
Real run in an isolated folder with only this skill installed. Only the Skill and Read tools were enabled, so nothing was fetched from the web and no file was written. The example is fictional. The paragraph to edit is invented.
它做什麼
檢視你已有的文案，而不是從零開始寫。它依固定順序做七輪打磨：清晰度、語氣與風格、「所以呢」（每個主張有沒有體現利益）、「拿出證據」（主張背後的依據）、具體性、強化情感，以及零風險（異議處理與風險兜底）。另有選用的專家小組評分方法與評分標準、詞語/句子/段落層面的快速檢查、AI 腔檢查、常見文案問題與修法（功能堆砌、官腔套話、開頭無力、CTA 被埋沒、缺少證據、泛泛而談），以及翻新過時內容的流程。參考文件涵蓋白話英文替換、檢查清單與內容翻新。
運作方式
- 你貼上文案，並說明用途。
- 模型逐輪打磨，回傳修改後的版本，並說明主要改動。
- 指出哪些主張需要真實的證據。
適合什麼場景
潤飾登陸頁、電子郵件與部落格文章，以及翻新舊內容。
低風險：純指令檔，沒有腳本，不連網、不寫檔。它只編輯你交給它的文字。改寫可能改變主張的含義，請核對改寫後文案中每一條主張、數字與保證是否仍然屬實。Skill 要求拿出真實證據而不是捏造。部分交叉引用指向本套件不包含的姊妹 Skill。已用一段虛構文字試用過一次。